Friday, April 21, 2006
I just wrote this in the comments field of a student's paper. I think I have read too many papers.

Awesome and economic presentation of studies -- now, tear the roof off this mofo! Tell us what this means to your thesis! Tell us what the implications of this are! You need a rhetorical finishing move here. This reminds me of how I always used to beat my friend Eric at Mortal Kombat, but I didn't know any finishing moves. His character would sit there, dying, and he'd be shouting at me, "Do a finishing move! C'mon!" Here, your character has beaten, like, the leopard guy, but you need to go for the knockout!!!

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